Talk:Enchanting tutorial

Initial feedback

This isn't bad at all, we need more of these basic tutorials. There are a few things I changed though. I would appreciate it if you could take a look at tutorial with the following things in mind. I guess you're not an experienced wiki editor, so I recommend the syntax and style guides.

• I removed the new NPC section, because the tutorial didn't explain anything about creating a new NPC. I don't think it has to, the Basic NPC Creation Tutorial does a good job, I referred to that.
• Wikified the source - you're using a lot of <br> tags, try to avoid those in Wiki articles.
• Some choices/instructions aren't clear in the article. Because this a basic tutorial I think it would benefit from a detailed explanation of every action. For example:
  • Changing the EditorID creates a new form, this should be explained. Also mention that you have to click YES on the question you get after clicking OK!
  • What do the Range, Area, Duration, etc. boxes on the effects window do?

I added an unfinished tag at the first line of the article to make sure we don't forget about it. If you think it's done you can remove that. I also added three categories at the bottom of the tag, but included them in HTML comments (<!-- and -->).
--Qazaaq 05:01, 6 October 2009 (EDT)

Thanks

thanks for the feedback, i'll be sure to keep it in mind. Also i believe that the huge pictures are unnessasary so i'll be making them slighty smaller later on.
--Oblivious12123 07:42, 6 December 2009 (EST)